The Art Blog of Brie Spielmann
Good start! I like those strokes on the foreground :) Maybe try unifying the trees more? Environment/landscapes are difficult, so I paint from photos first, or do "style studies" to help me warm up for personal pieces. I recommend:http://douglasfryer.blogspot.com/http://nathanfowkes-sketch.blogspot.com/I think Nathan Fowkes has more paintings with slimmer trees. There are plenty of digital landscape painters too. Hope this helps!